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Pickpocket
Last month I went to the Surakarta. I went by bus. In the bus, I saw beautiful girl sat in the corner. She read a magazine about criminal. Fifteen minutes later, she picked pocket a man who sat beside her. After that, she alighted from the bus. I screamed pickpocket but she had run away.
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wow...what a brave experience, it was...at the end., was she arrested???
As Ratih said, you were brave!
However, you need to work on some issues, such as:
*) definite/indefinite articles --> I went to Surakarta (no need definite article 'the'); a beautiful girl
*) word use --> criminal should be crimes.
Well done! :)
I think it's an interesting story, Great job!!!!
You can change "a magazine about criminal" into a criminal's magazine.
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